Friday 23 May 2014

My Special Place


                                                                       Reflection
I was learning how to use mu senses to add detail to my writing so that I can make my writing interesting for my reader. I found it easy to use my senses in my writing because I did a brain storm and it really helped me organise my writing to know where I can include my senses in my writing.I am really proud of my writing and my classmates did an awesome job too. I really liked their special places to.

Camp MERC


                                                                  Reflection
I was learning how to do show don't tell writing.  I found it quiet tricky because I couldn't do the part where I can't tell my feelings in one word. What I could of done different is ask someone to help think of other words and other sentences. My next step is to know to ask people if I need help and have a little bit more of show don't tell.

Thursday 22 May 2014

Comparing Fractions





Reflection
I am learning how to compare fractions. I found this work quiet easy because I drew a pizza that helped me find the answer quicker and I already knew that maybe they might be even because of the numerator and the denominator. What my next step would be is to compare with larger amount of fractions.