My holiday poems

Scrip for Inquiry Project

                                                                    Reflection
We are learning how to teach our fellow students of EPS what to do in an emergency this is our script. I found it okay with cooperating with my group and it was easy to write the script because it we had an idea from this video  that we saw on youtube.

Daffodil Diamante Poem

Reflection

I was learning how to write a diamante poem. I found this interesting because I had never done this type of poem before and I thought it was really cool. I found this really easy because we did a plan with nouns, adjectives and verbs. Now I plan to write a antonym  poem.

My 2014 speech

Reflection

We have been learning how to write an effective speech.  I found this easy because I understood my topic really well and I even really believed about my topic ( Why education is important ).  I began  my speech with a question or a imaginative thought I supported it with lots of information about why it is important and I ended my speech with a saying type of thing so people have something to think about.  Next time I could back my speech up with expert evidence and that will give a more effect on my main points. 

My Special Place

                                                                       Reflection
I was learning how to use mu senses to add detail to my writing so that I can make my writing interesting for my reader. I found it easy to use my senses in my writing because I did a brain storm and it really helped me organise my writing to know where I can include my senses in my writing.I am really proud of my writing and my classmates did an awesome job too. I really liked their special places to.

Camp MERC

                                                                  Reflection
I was learning how to do show don't tell writing.  I found it quiet tricky because I couldn't do the part where I can't tell my feelings in one word. What I could of done different is ask someone to help think of other words and other sentences. My next step is to know to ask people if I need help and have a little bit more of show don't tell.

Kennings Poem!!!

Reflection

I was learning how to write a kennings poem. I felt that I couldn't find the perfect verb to describe what I liked so I could of done better than I did. It was quiet challenging. Where I got stuck was when I had to find the verbs to describe myself.The thing I could of done differently is that I could of asked the teacher to help me find some verbs or I could  asked one of my friends. My next step is to dig deeper to find better verbs and ask someone for help.

My Did You Ever Poem

My Reflection

I was learning to write a Did You Ever poem.I felt that I knew was supposed to do because I knew what nouns were and it wasn't so hard .My next step is to challenge myself more by using some better describing words because I didn't have to think much.